Dear Juliet,
I love you more than anything in the whole world. I would lose everything just to gain your love and to keep it forever. You are like the sweetest candy in the whole world. I think you are the only key to continue my life, without a pause or a stop. However my dearest love Juliet, I have killed your favorite cousin Tybalt. I couldn’t stand and I couldn’t control myself when I found my best friend Mercutio dead. I had to get revenge in some way. I am very sorry my love. I am a Montague and you are a Capulet. We are the worst enemies and the worst rivals in the whole of Verona. We were never meant to be.... Juliet. If we get caught, we would be hated and killed. And even though no one would kill and hate us, our parents would no way approve us both. I would still love you no matter what but I don’t think this love would work.
Sincerly Your love,
Romeo
Grammar
1- Has less than 5 mistakes in this essay.
2- Has less than 3 mistakes in this essay.
Organization
1- This essay this pretty organized but needs some work.
2- This essay is very well organized and the reader can clearly know what the author is trying to tell the readers.
Spelling/punctuation
1- There is less than 5 mistakes in this essay.
2- There is less than 3 mistakes in this essay.
Content
1- The content of this essay is pretty well written with ideas. But this work is only satisfaction.
2- The content of this essay gives the readers a WOW factor.
Creativity
1- In this essay, it is contained with 1-2 ideas that please the readers.
2- By letting readers read this essay, it gives them the WOW factor, and it contains more than 3 ideas.
Creative essay rubric
Rubric for Creative essay
Eddie Moon
Period 4A
Dear Juliet,
I love you more than anything in the whole world. I would lose everything just to gain your love and to keep it forever. You are like the sweetest candy in the whole world. I think you are the only key to continue my life, without a pause or a stop. However my dearest love Juliet, I have killed your favorite cousin Tybalt. I couldn’t stand and I couldn’t control myself when I found my best friend Mercutio dead. I had to get revenge in some way. I am very sorry my love. I am a Montague and you are a Capulet. We are the worst enemies and the worst rivals in the whole of Verona. We were never meant to be.... Juliet. If we get caught, we would be hated and killed. And even though no one would kill and hate us, our parents would no way approve us both. I would still love you no matter what but I don’t think this love would work.
Sincerly Your love,
Romeo